At our latest Writing Circle the subjects which you could write about were "Breaking the Rules" and "The Street".
I produced the following, both of which are quite depressing, really. Don´t know why as, just at the moment anyway, I´m feeling quite at ease with life.
Appearances Are Deceptive.
The street´s quite short.
It´s nothing special,
Terraced houses side by side.
In summer people sit in doorways,
Kids kick a ball, dogs run and bark.
It seems so normal.
And so it is because life is like that,
Smooth on the surface, ordinary.
But inside, underneath, things are different.
When the door is shut, when no-one sees.
Blows and curses, tears and woe,
Pain and anguish, black despair,
Dreams all shattered, hopes awry.
Till, once more, thresholds are crossed,
Masks are in place
And life goes on in the street.
Crossing the Line.
I broke the rules today,
It felt good.
I thought about it for a long while,
Pondered,debated with myself,
Considered the consequences.
For some time I backed off, afraid.
What would happen if….?
What might he say when…..?
But then, I thought, could things be so much worse?
Could he do more than shout or strike?
So, on a wave of desperation
I went ahead and crossed him.
And it felt good.
But now it´s time for those consequences.
I realise it wasn´t the wisest thing to do
Because I can never win.
He has the strength. He has the power.
But it did feel good.
It´s very hot here in Spain now so I really can´t bring myself to do anything else. Hasta La huego!
Saturday, 30 July 2011
Wednesday, 20 July 2011
Competition
I recently entered a competion - didn´t win, mind you, but I rather liked the pieces I entered. The subject was "Going Home". I entered a poem and a piece of Flashfiction, which is just under 500 words. So although this is an actual poetry blog, I decided to put in both the entries even though the one is prose and the other is against what I state as the essence of the blog - poetry that rhymes. After all, it´s my blog, so I can do what I want to!!
Homecoming (494 words)
Cliff picked up his backpack and followed Annie out into the corridor.They were students in the same evening class but had never actually spoken to each other.
Going home?
Yes, I have to be up early tomorrow.
You haven´t got a car, have you? I´ll give you a lift if you like. I´m going your way.
How do you know where I live?
Well, I don´t, exactly. It´s just that I heard you once say in the break that you lived near Grange Park and I´m going over that way myself tonight.
They´d reached the main entrance. It was raining heavily.
You´ll get soaked if you walk to the bus stop in this.
Yes, I will, won´t I? OK, thanks,I´ll take you up on that lift. It´d be great. By the way, my name´s Annie.
Yes, I know. I´m Cliff. My motor´s over there. We´ll have to make a run for it.
It was one of those vans with windows you could see out of but not in. As Cliff opened the passenger door, Annie turned to him.
You seem to know a lot about me. My name, where I live, that I haven´t got a car.
She didn´t get in and he realised she was hesitating. He punched her hard in the face and she slumped against him, groaning.
He slid the rear door open and lifted her in, climbing in after her then closing the door.
There were only the two front seats and the rest of the van was an open space. The floor was covered in plastic sheeting and a spade was leaning against the back of one of the seats next to some knives and a saw in a bucket. He took the flex out of his pocket and slipped it round her neck. She started to choke and began to struggle but Cliff was stronger and it didn´t take long but the car park was too public a place to go any further. Besides he liked to take his time and follow his carefully worked out rituals.
Alright, darling, now you lie there still and we´ll go to Grange Park. You´ll like it there. It´s nice and quiet. He slid open the door, jumped out and after making sure the lock was secure, he got into the driver´s seat and drove off.
Several hours later, Cliff drew up outside his house at the end of a quiet private road on the outskirts of town. He went into the back of the van and felt the plastic sheeting. It was still wet from the water in the stream where he´d washed away Annie´s blood. He picked up the bucket and felt the heart. It was still slightly warm.
Well, Annie darling, you said you were going home and here you are. This is your new home. I´m sure you´ll be happy with the others. After all, sweetheart, you know what they say – Home is where the heart is.
Not The Right Time
You didn´t expect to go home so soon.
In your book it was much too early.
But somebody had a different slant on things
And whether or not you were along for the ride
It was the ride that decided the outcome.
You ended up as Road Kill
And although lots of people put in time and effort
Trying to see to it that you stayed put
You ended up going anyway.
So there was nothing to be done about it.
Homecoming (494 words)
Cliff picked up his backpack and followed Annie out into the corridor.They were students in the same evening class but had never actually spoken to each other.
Going home?
Yes, I have to be up early tomorrow.
You haven´t got a car, have you? I´ll give you a lift if you like. I´m going your way.
How do you know where I live?
Well, I don´t, exactly. It´s just that I heard you once say in the break that you lived near Grange Park and I´m going over that way myself tonight.
They´d reached the main entrance. It was raining heavily.
You´ll get soaked if you walk to the bus stop in this.
Yes, I will, won´t I? OK, thanks,I´ll take you up on that lift. It´d be great. By the way, my name´s Annie.
Yes, I know. I´m Cliff. My motor´s over there. We´ll have to make a run for it.
It was one of those vans with windows you could see out of but not in. As Cliff opened the passenger door, Annie turned to him.
You seem to know a lot about me. My name, where I live, that I haven´t got a car.
She didn´t get in and he realised she was hesitating. He punched her hard in the face and she slumped against him, groaning.
He slid the rear door open and lifted her in, climbing in after her then closing the door.
There were only the two front seats and the rest of the van was an open space. The floor was covered in plastic sheeting and a spade was leaning against the back of one of the seats next to some knives and a saw in a bucket. He took the flex out of his pocket and slipped it round her neck. She started to choke and began to struggle but Cliff was stronger and it didn´t take long but the car park was too public a place to go any further. Besides he liked to take his time and follow his carefully worked out rituals.
Alright, darling, now you lie there still and we´ll go to Grange Park. You´ll like it there. It´s nice and quiet. He slid open the door, jumped out and after making sure the lock was secure, he got into the driver´s seat and drove off.
Several hours later, Cliff drew up outside his house at the end of a quiet private road on the outskirts of town. He went into the back of the van and felt the plastic sheeting. It was still wet from the water in the stream where he´d washed away Annie´s blood. He picked up the bucket and felt the heart. It was still slightly warm.
Well, Annie darling, you said you were going home and here you are. This is your new home. I´m sure you´ll be happy with the others. After all, sweetheart, you know what they say – Home is where the heart is.
Not The Right Time
You didn´t expect to go home so soon.
In your book it was much too early.
But somebody had a different slant on things
And whether or not you were along for the ride
It was the ride that decided the outcome.
You ended up as Road Kill
And although lots of people put in time and effort
Trying to see to it that you stayed put
You ended up going anyway.
So there was nothing to be done about it.
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